Performance Poetry
P - His projection was good. Not too loud and not too soft, but in order to fit with the theme of the poem I wish he would be a bit more louder at some points to really show the emotion. His poem you can tell is something really personal and it has amazing emotion to it, but a louder voice would make the poem fantastic.
I - I loved his inflection. How he made words emphasised to give the audience a trip back to their childhood memories when they felt that way.
P - His pace is good. He is a bit slow in some parts but I think he means to just give us more time to reflect on the powerful words he's saying. I would like to see him go faster in the emotional parts and louder to raise the audiences heart rate and draw them into the poem.
E - He did okay with eye contact. He scanned the audience but held one part of the audience more then the rest. (the middle)
S - His stance and gestures were perfect. He stood proud and did not fidget. His gestures helped people understand it more.
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